Qatar Revisted

The rewrites on Qatar are going well. I presented the new lyric Good Things Come in Threes to DK and he liked it! Horray. I can't wait to hear what he comes up with. It's funny and does what it needs to do for the plot. Now I just hope that with all the cutting and shuffling and rewriting (and eliminating the intermission) it's shot enough to warrent elimating the intermission. Can't tell yet.